You are so right about that. We don't know
what we have until its gone. By the time we realize it might well be to late. 5/5

This is true we r either stupid n don't realize it or to scared to go for it

This is a definitely true poem. Sometimes people don't realize what's been in front of them the whole time. So I thought this was a great poem expressing that emotion of just how love usually works. Oh just a little side note. a little typo. It's realize, not realise. Great job. :)

"There will be a
day were she will"
hmm i am not sure about what were stand for in this line but i know its wrong here it should be "There will be a day when she will"
other than that its good poem
5/5 keep on =)

This poem is powerful in the content but I feel that it's a bit rocky in the flow. Aside from that I love the message, guys and also girls should realize or pay attention to what they have before it's too late.

Very true, i liked this poem, kinda never came across this before. a guy playing hard to get. really cool poem

Well-written, i like the style and the message..

Yess this happens often, people think they will aways be therre and then they take advantage. of it..sorry this is happening though but you did portray your emotions well in this piece of poetry --

awesome poem :) 5?5

The message in this piece is really true, people especially men dont really realise what they have until its long gone, thats when they start to regret and want that thing back