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  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Lol this poem made me smile. This is what a lot of men want to say, but can't.

    "I hope you're not looking for something
    stable
    Cause you don't know what I'll do
    Just read my label:
    "I will complicate you"
    I'll show you some introspect
    Turn you inside out
    Destroy your every life's aspect"

    Every girl/woman wants someone to make them happy. Someone who's 'perfect' for them.

    Really well-written :)

    -X

  • 11 years ago

    by josefina reyna

    Perfect fits everyday life well done:}

  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Show you why life is messed up and unfair
    Why the rich always win and the poor never do
    Show you what we can but simply not dare
    Why everyone but me hasn't got a clue

    --Nice ending, one of my favorite part of this poem. I really enjoy the whole piece. Keep writing on:))
    ~C

  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    Excellent poem i love it :) 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    This made me laugh . i like it

  • 11 years ago

    by retha

    Oh heavens ! I am past the sell by date, 0 to 1 seconds from silver platter to paperplate.
    Alas poor fool for me it is too late, sadly i can fool heartedly relate.

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow, this piece is amazing. The comparisons were amazing, the word choice was excellent, my gosh all of it was great. I see why you are so loved among the right people.

    I'm reasonably priced even with taxes
    Maybe a little old-fashioned, outdated
    Just like ATARIs and faxes
    Forgotten and underrated

    ^^ That is my favorite stanza. It really made me smile, though not for the reason you'd think.

    Fantastic write.