Writing Therapy

by Yrem Crish   Apr 21, 2012


I hate it! I hate it!
I want to burst it out,
But I can't...
I want to shout it loud,
But I'm mute...
I want to take revenge.
But I'm scared...
I want to feel at home,
But I'm so helpless...

Again and again...
Same things happened,
Facing these old paper and pen
While writing this damn feeling;
Mending alone to cure my self,
In this note serves as
My healing therapist...

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  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    I can relate to this poem writing Therapy that what i need :) 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by nouriguess

    A piece that most of the poets here and everywhere can relate to. I am these days, myself, feeling down. Such a shame when you want to express lots of things inside of you but you cannot...you simply can't! I always go through times like this and that really sucks. I loved the tone here, as if you are so mad at someone and just letting it out. However the depths of this poem meant something as well. Refering to papers and pen and the therapy bit were unable to be neglectable. I loved this write. Keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by Max

    Well Good thing it has effect yet.
    i love this poem as u want to tell you emotions but you cant say it in direct so you go for writing to put them outside u and feel relaxed again
    5/5 keep writing =)

  • 11 years ago

    by LoVerSLaND

    Nice & original.
    Easily relateable
    5/5.

  • 11 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I loved how you expressed your feelings of wanting to let it all out but you always fail..you try everything but it seems you are just hopeless...then there is one thing you can always do that will always help you relax and forget your fears....and that is to write it all down...great work on this one