I Love Him Because...

This is so cute and adorable. You described your love for him, thus, letting us in on his looks. Very lovely crafted piece. We all get tangled inlove with someone whom hardly knows we exist. Its good you layed it out through writing. At least that's a relief. I hope he'll come to notice your feelings for him, perhaps he might have. Smooth flow and well said. Good job!!!

Trying to hide your feelings for someone isn't easy.. yet, expressing it through writings will relieve your unspoken thought a little.. ^_^
i can relate in this poem!

PERFECT!!.. i like it! ^_^
keep it up!

:) very cute poem :) really like it...

I lav everythin bout this piece...ur description of how and why u love him is amazing...i realy liked how u end it,realy amazing....

I like this poem. Very nice