Really descriptive. The atmosphere, flow, word choice--I love everything in this piece. I wouldn't change a thing. Amazing write 5/5 :)

-X

Very touching, sad and meaningful

"So tear me wide open
And dissect my pathetic soul
You'll find naught but black ashes
a poor desecrated heart."

"Spread the ashes in the wind
Allow me to soar on the breeze
But do not shed a tear for me.
When your hands become empty
Wash yourself of your pity,
Wash yourself of my tragedy."

Wow from the very beginning to the very end, I could feel how powerful this poem is.
I loved it.

5/5
Jenn

Wow this is amazing i really love it the flow is so nice 5/5 keep on =)

Hard sad lines...Amazing piece!

Greetings.

I read like 10 poems of yours. But, this one caught my attention so hard.

First of all, Your vocabulary is wide that you can describe your message so well with the mix of depthness on it. Secondly, the emotions that you rooted on your piece is exceptional. It is strong and direct. Lastly, the flow is kinda off to me but as I go on reading the flow keeps on getting better. It is a fine piece. Be proud.

Keep it up
5 for me

I could really feel what the persona expresses,deep sharp emotions flood this piece.amazing write

Very sad, meaningful lines!

Great poem!

Wow! What a poem! The feelings in this poem hit you like an avalanche.
Simply love it. You have much talent.
Keep writing!

Well done on the imagination.... Also the old english lanuage I love that....way different then my style og writing but good job.