The Titanic. What a tragey and who would havethought it would sink. to this day
the truth remains to be seen. Amazing piece
Excellent written

This time difference Liz, when you post a poem early in the day, and I'm about to rest my head you always blow me away so I am left in awe and unable to sleep.

Immediately it's the flawless smoothness of the flow and the simplicity of your wording that stands out. Beyond that you're story telling abilities are amazing.

Liz, a great great piece.
xxx

Do you know why I hate sad poems, because I easily get touched..

Your word choice made the poem attracting, and flawless. Amazing poem, great job:)

My god I love this piece! You have such an amazing sense of the tragedy that was the titanic and you convey it flawlessly.

I love the way you layed out the verses it makes the reader completely absorb what has been written and with the topic that this is in think it is just to pay attention in that way, i genuinely believe that that honours the ship and all that sailed with her and shows great respect.

Simply fantastic xxx

Liz- You have captivated me with this historic vision of the titanic.... touching and heart teary piece....

The titanic was a captivating story and sad one as well. This poem is captivating too and it also shares important information to the reader and that's what I like the most that it was done in a poetic way.

I loved how the piece told the story of the titanic and I liked the facts you put into the poem as it really makes the reader think about what happened. This is a thought provoking piece that really grabs the reader.

5/5

Excellent work! Im speechless.

Excellent work! Im speechless.