Comments : Blood Smeared Pages

  • 5 years ago

    by Xanthe

    The rhyme flowed with ease. I love the concept of writing your world/life in a book. Really enjoyed reading this. Great write 5/5 :) Keep writing. Hope all is well

    -X

  • 5 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Sonia!

    This was the best you've ever wrote in my opinion this was just amazing

    So sad and heart touching
    This is going on my fav poems!

    Just beautiful I'm out of words!
    100/5

  • 5 years ago

    by josefina reyna

    Good poem nice job I love how u put so much emotion into it

  • 5 years ago

    by Merci Perpe

    Dang... This is great! You're a wondreful writer, keep it up!

  • 5 years ago

    by Nella Khatsune

    This poem is so heart touching. :"33
    I completely love it c:
    Do please continue writing more.

  • 5 years ago

    by Sora Lynn

    Beautiful and sad! a wonderful write. awesome title as well, always good to have a title that catches the reader's eye. job well done

    Ash

  • 5 years ago

    by LoVerSLaND

    One of my fav poems now & my fav part:
    It was hard for me to write,
    When the pages were being stained red.
    But I needed to write out my life,
    Before I was dead.

    I felt that if I didn't,
    I would have been of no use.
    Like there was no reason for me to be good,
    I might as well have let the monster loose.

    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Amy

    Love this poem! Sad but it was a great write!:) love the rhymes the choice of words and good flow! 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Justusrosario

    U need to be who u are when its jst me n u together and block the world out write me a haPpy poem

  • 5 years ago

    by My Other Side

    You have a lot of power in your words. The emotional content is superb and quite moving. Some pieces are difficult to write while others flow very easily. The same can be said for reading poetry. The journey through the page can be simple and light. Or it can be tumultuous and difficult to finish. Poetry is often raw and overpowering. My favorite poetry is the real kind. From the depths of the heart and soul.
    Well Done
    PEACE

  • 5 years ago

    by Joseph Boadi

    Diction great,content touchy,rhymes nailed.great piece.i could relate to that

  • 4 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    This poem is so beautiful. I love how it feels as though you are telling a story. Great poem.

    • 4 years ago

      by Angel

      To me poems are supposed to tell stories so thats what i try to do in all of mine :) thank you

  • 4 years ago

    by UtterlyAlive

    This poem is amazing, I read yours and then I read mine but they just don't compare, your are simply amazing. I don't see how this can possibly be improved!

  • 4 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    Wow, this poem kept me reading from start to finish, and it takes alot to actually keep my attention like that. You held so much emotion in all of your words and it made it easy to feel every emotion that you were feeling. Your poem really hit hard for me because i seemed to understand exactly what you mean, the only difference is, i never wrote it in a journal or anything. But, this poem really affected me. You done a great job

  • 3 years ago

    by ZinaZonic

    Really touching, i had to hold back tears, the emotion was incredible.

    • 3 years ago

      by Angel

      Aw thank you :)