Comments : Breathless

  • 11 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    A very heartfelt poem!
    straight away the emotion jumped out to me. too me it flowed quite well.. the breaks make it so much better imo

    Was this for the poetry contest by any chance? =P

    "I've won what most people want to capture,
    I've captured a love-
    A true love,
    A breathless love."

    the end was the best part for me
    summed it up quite nicley!.. and keeping to the title

    keep writing!
    5/5 from me
    truley a beautifull poem

    • 11 years ago

      by Kitty Kurse

      Haha, yeah it was for the contest:) and thanks! Will do!

  • 11 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is a great poem. i love it!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    Beautiful, beautiful poem. I know what it is like to have that true, breathless love. I loved this one so much. My new favorite. <3

  • 11 years ago

    by Max

    I love this piece
    the flow is cool and the word choice is nice too gr8 one 5/5 =)

  • 11 years ago

    by Salina Is Beautiful

    Love the last line it rlly gave the poem a nice ending
    5/5
    <3 salina

  • 11 years ago

    by Nella Khatsune

    Magnificent poem, extremely love it(:
    Seems so true of how love is :3
    I love it. This will be on my favorites<3