Comments : You Rhyme the Freedom in my Poetry

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Nana, Never do you fail to amaze me, I found this piece very inspiring, and I felt you were talking to another part of you, a part of you that is loved...

    I wasn't sure if this was actually about someone in your life, or metaphorical...
    but either way it was beautifully written as always

    and the imagery and wording very contrasting and smooth, I loved the gentle rhymes and the way you incorporated them into your style.

    Loved it
    mwah
    xxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love this completely!

    I feel as though you're trying to say that this person you are with makes you want to be a better person (though I think you're marvelous already) Maybe you like the way they see you rather than the way you see yourself. I loved the rhyming of it, it flowed so well and everything just melted into each other. Beautifully writen! I love it!!!

    x

  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Wow..great piece, love the metaphors in this poem..great!

  • 11 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Nana, you rhyme everything! God damn this write! How beautiful and just soft!