My Only Regret

"What is a friend? A single soul, dwelling in two bodies"
>a definition by Aristotle...

>Friendship is the relationship sharing love, respect and loyalty to each other..and tribulation of struggles, comforts and commitments to know each other either in bad or better..but, sometimes we can't avoid mistakes..we're not perfect...and real friend is the one who understands the imperfection of her/his friend...

With you, it was like
those days
when the moon
was still visible in
the bluest of skies ,

everything was
so clear.

I could hear your
voice and though
we were miles away,
we were bound
by our friendship.

>>Yet, my idea here...as a friend you feel ease and comfortable with her even you feel gloom..she made you smile...
I like the way you write here:
"moon
was still visible in
the bluest of skies"....well-penned and the imagery is brilliant...

I wonder,
if I hadn't ruined
things, where
would we be now.

Are you thinking
of me, the way
that I am thinking
of you.

I miss you
my sunshine,
you are
my only regret.

>>So touchy.."I miss you my sunshine you are my only regret"...I like the way you use "SUNSHINE"...because in this quoted word means she is the one who lights your life...very sweet and tender..i really really love this...and learned a lesson from here that I must value my friend and the friendship we handled..thanks for this ma'am..one of my fav too..this is splendidly written..and you got deserve to rate of 100 of 100...

This poem is so sad :( I think we all have a broken relationship with someone and wonder where they are now and what they are doing and are they thinking of us. Your poem sums the situation up so well. I love how your work is relateable and emotional.

5/5

:-( this poem hits me hard- I can relate to this piece... the poem Liz is so elegant and captivating... the flow is pretty...and it just makes a person sigh at the end...very heartfelt piece..

When you lose contact with a good friend it really hurts I know that feeling, hope things get better:)
Amazing poem Liz:)

No matter how close the Friendship is
at times we mess up, hey nobody is perfect.
Also, a true Friend will forgive your mistake
and the bond may become stronger. Reach out while you can