Comments : Synaesthesia

  • 11 years ago

    by Lioness

    I want to say thank you for teaching me something new. This poem really opened up my eyes to so many things out there that I don't even know about. This is quite interesting and amazing that there are people in the world doing that. At first when I was reading it I thought wow what a beautiful love poem. The metaphors you used were spectacular and I enjoyed the read. I was blown away by the little note at the end explaining what you were intentionally trying to say, the words had a deeper meaning behind them. When I read the little note I don't know why but the tv show Touch came into my head. I know the two things are different but somehow they are similar because they describe something amazing.

    Your poem was excellent. I loved the images and the flow. It was very enjoyable to read.

    x

  • 11 years ago

    by Amber

    Love it

  • 11 years ago

    by Amber

    Love it

  • 11 years ago

    by Thomas

    Very nice poem
    You really made feel the things going through your head.
    I also like the hint of sarcasm.

    I almost smiled then
    -almost-

    That made the poem for me

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by East Poetry

    This poem was painted very beautifully, Im glad I read the meaning of what Synaesthesia is before I read the poem, it added to its grandeur.

  • 11 years ago

    by Blissful

    Whoa...this was amazing! I loved the mention of the four seasons throughout your poem and how you tied it all in nicely together. This told the tale of a love that started so sweet but left one empty in the end...well that is what I got from it. When we first fall in love with someone, their voice is the only song we want to hear and their words are the only thing we want to taste but they say the hottest love burns the fastest...I adored your word choice here...I read each word slowly just to savor it's meaning throughout the piece. Beautifully written!