I cnt mis to read ur poems, js to breathe agn..

"I've thought,
realized a bit
that I cry
just so I can breathe again."
---Sometimes, we just have to let everything out in order to move on. Let go of the past, every mistake, all the grudges. and just move on.
"my heart swirls with the wind
like trees outside my window,
just so I can breathe again."
---There's something in this simple imagery and simile that I can't explain. It's just so......simple
I like it. Great piece. Keep writing :) 5
-X

So true, maybe that's why I can barely breathe as I hold it in when I'm with him

great job