Contribution to my sister

by Catrina miller   Apr 29, 2012


This is for Paige my sister

the night was cold
the winds brutal
her blood was flowing
threw a wound
lights flashing
me screaming
crying hard
for her to make it
we didn't know
how bad it was
the docter talking
mother crying
father telling
us kids the truth

she wakes up
we all cry
happy thoughts
she's alright
we are starin at her
she starts to cry
confused of what happened
bun finally alright

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  • 11 years ago

    by Just A Stupid Girl

    Love the imagry of this

  • 11 years ago

    by Just A Stupid Girl

    You did very well on this you really did capture the mood and image of that horrible night

  • 11 years ago

    by Just A Stupid Girl

    Its nice toknow that you care

  • 11 years ago

    by Just A Stupid Girl

    Good job sister

  • 11 years ago

    by Catrina miller

    Thank you it was very meaning ful to me because my sister almost died.

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