Missing again

by Ole Carsten   May 1, 2012


Missing
To find your lips
Reaching for the magic
Meeting our sensibility
Fingers running over your lovely hand
Flashing a bright smile towards my eyes
I leaned forwards returned your blink
Prepared me for a kiss
again I am
missing

trying a new poem form, inspired by Maple tree

Rictameter is a scheme similar to Cinquain. Starting your first line with a two syllable word, you then
consecutively increase the number of syllables per line by two. i.e. 2, 4, 6, 8, 10 Then down again,
8, 6, 4, 2 Making the final line the same two syllable word you began with.

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Latest Comments

  • 11 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi thanks for a wonderful comment

  • 11 years ago

    by Odin Ebbesen

    I join the choir, I haven't see this before, funny and like able a clean five

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    This poem jumped out at me and flew into my heart, a great poem, 100/100

    • 11 years ago

      by Ole Carsten

      Wauhh, nice comment so kind of you

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is absolutely remarkeable, a wonderful
    and sweet piece. Excellent

    • 11 years ago

      by Ole Carsten

      Hi D
      You are my fantastic support
      thanks for kind comment

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