Comments : Pain and regret

  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    I feel pain and regret i like this poem :) 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Aahhh hate having to say corrections on such a good poem but "wicked where your lies"... it should be "were" if you're talking about the lies
    "Memorie" should be "memory" or "memories"
    Sorry hun, just those few corrections then it's perfection

    • 11 years ago

      by tyler

      Thanks, im smart but i suck at spelling lol