Comments : Hope in Sunrise (Diamante)

  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    It's beautiful, though I thought it should be under 'nature poems'. It has a relaxing vibe. I get that everytime a day ends and the sun went down, the moon is high up and the stars are shining. The tone and atmosphere sets a good vibe within the piece and the simple word choice completes this. Nice, nice..
    -X

  • 11 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Yeah, i agree with the above comment, but anyhow, life is very connected to nature and vice versa so it doesnt matter, lol. This is really good yknow, you chose the words quite well in this one. I like it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Max

    Nice
    i love it
    the form is fitting gr8 xD
    good work =)

  • 11 years ago

    by Angel

    I llove how you made it go from sunrise to sunset. it flowed rogether very nicely :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Little things portray Life's beauty...and here, you proved it, yet another time! Good job..

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    These words flew off my tongue so swiftly and meaningful, short but entrierly enjoyable, great poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Abslutely beautiful

  • 11 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Its another unique poem for me..short and beautiful!!
    we also have these kinds of short poems in nepalese literature,we have different sort of name for it.......what do u actually call it in english??i m curious to know.

  • 11 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Sun rise, sun set, I love this piece itss short and powerrful and I realy liked how you wrote that middle, you're sound so poetric in this short poem. awesome writing keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    I really love the flow in this poem a lot :)

  • 11 years ago

    by East Poetry

    I dig these little organized poems. So cool how it start out with the sunrise and then contrasts into the sunset.

  • 11 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Its always beautiful to write about nature. One surely gets a feeling of warmth and belonging. You described the splendor of the sunshine in the 1st half of the poem, words choosen perfectly. While, in the 2nd half of the piece, you veered into the peaceful dim sunset. A gradual descend from the initial start. An impressive piece i must say. Vibrantly made. Bravo!!! :) ..