Comments : Lunar Love

  • 11 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I missed that big moon but will sleep outside today in case it chows up..lol..great use of words here, this is amazing.

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    The Gibbous moon gracefully glided,
    across a sea of blue nothingness
    caressing dusky billows,

    ^I missed that moon too and I am sure it would have sparked many a mind to pen its beauty and that is what is revealed in this write!

    An enamored Gulmohar,
    looked on, coldly,
    drenched in unfulfilled desires,

    ^One can feel the yearning of all those piled
    up desires!

    He, a mere spectator,
    the Rusty Streetlamp,
    a witness to flirtatious smiles
    and longing sighs.

    ^As I read this it just came to my mind like a scene from a movie where the longing heart waits for a sweet glance from the maiden...a lovely read!

  • 11 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    As always your words flow like a gentle stream and as beautiful as a sunset. Loved this one
    TJ