Comments : Why am I crying?

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Often in Life we ask oourselves why
    The truth remain to be seen
    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Kelwin lost in thought

    I love it. I've felt that way so many times. Good job baby.

  • 5 years ago

    by Kitty Kurse

    WOW, this is so sad and full of emotion I loved it.
    "Why am I crying over you again?
    I told myself that I shouldnt let this begin.
    I slice my wrist and my tears mix with blood.
    Then I fall the the floor with a big THUD"
    I like how you added in sensory.

    "Why am I crying when this always happens.
    I knew this was it, when I heard the tapping.
    I cut into my skin deeper and let the blood drip to the floor.
    Why didnt I just think of this before"
    Its like I can imagine my self in this i can relate very well, It's like i can see myself standing there crying hearing my blood slowly drip to the floor.
    All in all short but full of emotion. Great write!
    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Bobby

    I really like the opening

    "Why am I crying over you again?
    I told myself that I shouldnt let this begin."

    reminds us how hard it is to let go of something we really cared about in our lives

    great emotions in your write