Monsters

Very intense. like a monster is chasing someone and your just there or something like that? i dont know. i like these types of poems lots. again the simple approach worked really well here.

Very nice piece, the past can indeed haunt like monsters do

5/5

WOWZERS!!
So different from your other poems, but just as enjoyable!

My sense is that these are mental monsters triggered by something of significance... Hopefully all id well now.

Another 5/5

Liked it cary on

You really did the dark tone justice. I love the single-word lines; it made the flow dramatic and beautiful. But the capitalisation in each of the beginning lines disrupted with the flow a bit, in my opinion. I only capitalize each beginning letter when it comes to acrostics without following the punctuation. I think you should follow the punctuation, and not capitalize when unnecessary.
Still, a really good piece. Just stated some advice that can be used in the future :)
I also like the adding of persona in the end. Keep writing
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