Umbrage

by Yrem Crish   May 10, 2012


I felt breathless,
when she kissed my lips,
my world clouded with darkness,
whispered to God for forgiveness;
resented because another sin drips...
Pouring the innocent soul into my mouth,
and falling to my watering esophagus;
I just cry the pain as the turmoil
carries him into my dark hole...

I was watching in the television when the news flashed about the fetus found in the toilet bowl..so I decided to write a poem about the case of abortion in the toilet bowl:=(

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  • 11 years ago

    by Jenn

    Very interesting to read a poem written from the perspective of a toilet bowl... even weirder to say. lol But it works. And it does bring a mournful feeling with it.

    "I just cry the pain as the turmoil
    carries him into my dark hole..."

    Congratulations this is good stuff, and not many people can say they can write a meaningful and beautiful poem about an experience a toilet bowl had. :))

    5/5
    Jenn

  • 11 years ago

    by East Poetry

    What a tragedy, that this kind of thing happens in this world.

  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    I love the flow of the word's in tis poem a lot very well written :) 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Thomas

    Not sure how I feel about this poem

    I understand your disgust but I dont really feel your disgust in particular.

  • 11 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Every action, owes an answer. At the verge of death, judgement comes.