Untouchable.

by Victoria   May 12, 2012


A frozen rose left in the bitter, cold snow,
A million lies it must know...
Behind the cold, hard ice,
Her Beauty beneath the glass -cost a price,
It's been treated so wrong ...
It's been treated so long...
As if it now is untouchable.
Fragile, to it's petals bare touch,
she's endured way too much.
A sweet lullaby,a savor of it's life, a sweet kiss,
An angel that won't forget it like-- this,
Out here, treated so wrong....
she's been treated so long...
As if now- she is untouchable.

Inspired somewhat by....this song :)
(Natalie Merchant-My Skin)

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  • 11 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow fantastic write. I loved the flow and rythym. Keep up the great work.

    Peace and love, Joe

  • 11 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow fantastic write. I loved the flow and rythym. Keep up the great work.

    Peace and love, Joe

  • 11 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    This is good, fine words youve chosen here, lovely. Im impressed with the whole structure of the poem, like a verse of some sad love song, then I read the note thing below. Great, really great. I like that singer too btw, uh, that was irrelevant lol, nevermind. :D