Comments : I'm sorry

  • 5 years ago

    by yogi73

    Ouch. your emotions come through crystal clear. I think I"m a little afraid of you as well. good job

  • 5 years ago

    by Biancas Veil

    Thanks as this is one of my first poems I have written.

  • 5 years ago

    by Biancas Veil

    Thanks as this is one of my first poems I have written.

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Its like a darkness that is looming behind the person...waiting patiently for the kill. An interesting write that leaves the reader with fear or of what is coming next!

  • 5 years ago

    by JustAnotherPoet

    I'm sorry for saying sorry
    And im sorry you don't care
    One day soon you will see that
    I am not the one who is sorry and it
    Will be me that you fear.

    I really like this part. And I am sure that other girls who have experience heartbreak can relate to this as well. Nice poem!

  • 5 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    So much meaning and expression, I almost cried, I love your work, another great job, you'll be famous one day, for your amazing poetry, amazing, wonderful, outstanding...

  • 5 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Nice piece. I can feel the strong emotion here and the darkness of the feeling of persona. I hope you feel better this time. Great job:))
    ~C

  • 5 years ago

    by sham pulok

    Really a nice piece... i love it...

  • 4 years ago

    by Erick Neal

    Loved the ending. Great work!

  • 3 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    I'm sorry those though words but u did it nice

  • 3 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    Wow, love it, you portrayed the feelings very well.. good job

  • 3 years ago

    by staystrong87

    It's nice to write your feeling in this way

  • 3 years ago

    by Angel Tears

    The emotion in this poem was very raw, and was portrayed to the reader fully. This part in particular touched home for me:

    "I am not the one who is sorry and it
    Will be me that you fear. "

  • 3 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Absence felt, reminds relevance. Within every scar, healing dwells.

  • 3 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Absence felt, reminds relevance. Within every scar, healing dwells.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Tasha

    love it