Colors

by Veamm   May 13, 2012


Colors

Please define equality?
Know each boundary
Colors equals humanity
The pride of our identity

Colors of our skin
Represents our soul
Racism that we have seen
Is this the greatest goal?

Power, authority and domination
The rule that the world obeys
Suffering and discrimination
The feeling that the world conveys

White or black. Does it matter?
We are all made by Our Creator
Rock or Gold. No one wants to suffer
Because justice is best equator

Balance releases cures for discontent
While tomorrow molds our future, Our Glory
And today represents our present
Unending time is history, Our story

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  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Ahh.. Let me tell you:
    this piece was close to winning. The message is just beautiful and impacting. Your word choice made it effective. But I considered all possible sides and angles. Perhaps what didn't let this win is, as I've said, a tad lack of emotion. And maybe the simple title added to that factor as well.
    Err.. You made it really hard for me. But this is a winning piece. Amazing job. Keep it up
    -X

  • 11 years ago

    by Max

    This is
    hmm AMAZING
    I love this
    first of all i tell u i can sense rhyme in your poem
    which make it flowing so smooth but in some parts i felt like you forced it( maybe it is just me)
    the word choice was perfectly fitting
    you had a very good start stanza so as the ending stanza too
    it made your poem even better
    Over all this is a well written piece
    5/5 keep writing =)

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