Wow. Great poem. Keep writing:)

It is really nice. I can feel your despair in the poem and the last line made my heart ache. Though the girl is suffering, she still masks it all with a smile. Good poem! :)

"ace" should be "ache" in ending lines....otherwise this was a short but effective poem in that while you didn't use as many images or words to describe the sadness, you used emotion. I thought the part where you explained not being able to cry was traumatic, that feeling of being so suffocated.

Keep writing and thanks for the comment on my poem!

WOW! i love it , so much emotion. great description