Comments : With u

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Holy camoly,

    I like this piece, it's so so I can't find the correct word to describe it. I simply like it.

    I like this the most

    The definition of beauty
    and you are always with me.
    The sweetest of all
    I call it your lips.
    The portal to my heart
    I call it your eyes.
    Adrenaline of fantasy
    I call it your touch.
    Summoner of love,
    I call her you.
    Forever is a short time
    compare to the time I want to spend
    WITH U....

  • 11 years ago

    by Joseph Boadi

    Awwwwww.i felt that deep emotion,this poem portrayed.diction i would say simple strong and simply amazing.beautiful piece.5/5 for you

  • 11 years ago

    by Joseph Boadi

    Awwwwww.i felt that deep emotion,this poem portrayed.diction i would say simple strong and simply amazing.beautiful piece.5/5 for you