Comments : King and Queen

  • 11 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This was an amazing poem. There was so much imagery and i loved it! 5/5 for sure

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Thank you so much! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by rock serenade

    Oh soos cute liked it
    :) :) 5/5:) :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Kips2.0

    Wow!! This piece said it all. I could steal this and share it with friends. A perfect picture of the very humble beginning of true love.

    Good piece. Keep writing! 5/5 :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Faith Ann

    Awww very cute! Loved this one! 5/5 =)

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Monroe92

    This is soo cute :)
    great work!

  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    I love this piece..so amazing and awesome imagery. Really impressing..keep writing:))
    ~C

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    A very simple piece, but I enjoyed it a lot. It was a refreshing piece, yet had some "taste" to it if you will. I love the descriptions and the voice wrapped up in the light cheerful tone; excellent.

    5/5

    ~MRK

  • 11 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Short and sweet..and rhyming and flow ws perfct..grt work hannah..

  • Oh this is a cute little piece! I particularly love the end verse. It flowed very nicely and had lovely rhyme.
    I must say the very first verse reminds me of Snow White. Great imagery that.
    Another undeniable 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    So many people would love a poem like this for a wedding

    Amazing as the rest ... loved the rhymin skeam ..

    I seriously never seen poetess write love poems like this

    stunning