Comments : Food Coloring

  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Very dark but I love the imagery, the flow and the punctuation used here...I like the words of choice too...ending part of the poem is very creative...

    "I would have to spend
    coloring up your darkness...."

    My mind drift in the air thinking about it...but I know it is very meaningful. Clever work:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Decayed

    Andrea.. I love the whole idea behind this: coloring darkness!!!!

    It's a brilliant piece... and so moving.

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I love the idea, painting over darkness

  • 11 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    I love the idea of you coloring your nightmares..
    Another perfect poem written by you:)
    Wish you the best<3

  • 11 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh my hun this poem is amazing. I love the images I love the metaphors. You've done well with this. The sadness runs so deep I can feel everything. I am sorry you're feeling like this hun

    x

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This is amazing, so creative. 5/5