Comments : You give me the butterflies

  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Sweet and touchy poem:)

    "You give me butterflies
    And make me feel like a little girl
    When you look into my eyes
    You take me to another world"

    I like the way you start this piece and this is my favorite part. As a whole, I really enjoy reading this. Good job:))
    ~C

  • 11 years ago

    by JustAnotherPoet

    Awww... This is really very sweet.

    You give me butterflies
    I love feeling this way
    Every time that you stop by
    You manage to make my day

    This brought a smile to my face. :) Really nice and very genuine.

  • 11 years ago

    by Dakota Blue Cicilline

    Thank you xox I plan to make more =]

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    WONDERFUL POEM!!!!!!! I ADORE IT, MAGINFICENT JOB!!