When I open this piece..I think I'm lazy to read because it was written long..and a bit cloudy. But, as I read it continuously the eagerness arises me to finish it. I like the whole idea. Very amazing and done great. Keep writing more:))
5/5
~C

I'm in the same situation. :( Luv ur poem a lot :)

Wow, wow, wow, wow. This was incredible to read, this just blew me away, you have a lot as a writer, and this is such an outstanding poem, I LOVE IT 100/100