Comments : Somewhere in Europe

  • 11 years ago

    by Britt

    Ah Yaki this is everything I thought it would be! This is so beautiful and I don't know why you'd put it under sad! I felt so much hope and trust in this poem. Beautiful!

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Like money in old jeans...

    Best analogy Ive read in such a long time...

    Yaki this poem is not sad to me. Its about where you dream to be. And dreams are happy....with determination and confidence you will get there some day! You will! Never seems like it when we are young but it will happen for you if you want it that bad. Good luck on your journey love!

  • 11 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I feel like you've always been one of those big dreamers like I am. You are always dreaming and with that brings these beautiful poems. You also seem very ambitious & adventurous & hopefully you get to make these dreams become reality some day soon! Your happiness is most important & I hope these dreams help you find some comfort and smiles. Gorgeous piece, I've missed reading your poems!

  • 11 years ago

    by Thomas

    Good poem

    there, is where I want to find
    myself, like money in
    some old jeans

    this line made the poem for me, I love the imagery

    Come to Europe we could use a poet like you ;)

    5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Now we i europe peopleeee

    when dreams come.true