Comments : Your Completion-

  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    1 nit, Luster ahould be lustre.

    This to me portrays a girl looking in her lovers eyes and quietly appreciating her fate that has brought them together.
    No idea what golden winds are but it works, Riddles of skin?
    Is this person wrinkled?
    Short but powerful poem.
    regards