Comments : My Italiana

  • 5 years ago

    by nourayasmine

    Meme. That's what I call perfection. Will comment later.

  • 5 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    ^^
    I agree its perfectly written:)
    Great poem:)

  • 5 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I love this Meme, it is so beautiful, really beautiful poetry here,
    love the imagery and wording...

  • 5 years ago

    by Lioness

    What an opening!!! I love the image of Tuscan night. It makes me think of the movie "Under The Tuscan Sun" which is one of my favs. It looks like such a beautiful place that I would love to visit.

    I love how you have used the words Gondala's. I've never been on one but I stayed at the Venetian in Las Vegas where they had the Gondola rides at the hotel and it looked beautiful. Unfortunately I didn't get on the boat but it looked amazing. I am getting such beautiful images and lovely memories from reading your poem and I'm only up to the third stanza.

    Oh the ending is beautiful, this is so poetic and lovely, really. I am enjoying this piece completely.

    Awesome write hun, gorgeous!!!

    x

    • 5 years ago

      by Meme

      I never visited Italy, but it has always been a dream of mine to go there :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Decayed

    Now I really want to go to Venice.. or any place in Italy!

    Meme, this is your best poem... Every foreign word used just thickened this piece!!

    "Amore" at the end made me speechless.

    Definitely nominated!

  • 5 years ago

    by ArtistrySoul

    Great poem, i really liked this stanza

    'I inhaled your salty air
    with the aroma of toasted
    coffee beans; only to be
    addicted to you ..'

    Nicely written :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Boy

    Amore,
    we still have Florence and
    Rome, and endless walks in
    many roads. I stole you once
    and I'll steal you twice ..

    awww. ma fav stanza. in whole poem. its very soft to read and so calm nice... i would definitely appreciate it. good work...

    by the way "Amore" whats that meaning... i didnt get

  • 5 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Damm it meme !!!! That is one hell of a write.....i dont actually know where to begin.....you left me wandering those little roads of rome wanting someone close to walk with me, just epic x

  • 5 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow!!! This poem is lovely!!! I absolutely love this poem, and I like how it's about falling in love with Italy! I have been there and I love it!! I can't believe you never have, from this poem, it feels like you've been there and know it well! That makes you an even greater poet :)

    Te amo!! Great job sweetie :*

  • 5 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow Meme, Loved the flow and rhythm that this poem had. Wonderful write that is full of emotion and historical landmarks. Bravo to a job well done. Keep up the fabulous work.

    Peace and Love,
    Joe

  • 5 years ago

    by Blissful

    This poem should come with two tickets to Italy! :) It made me want to go to Italy so much more than I already do lol. This was such a fun poem to read and I like how you incorporated Italy into it so easily. This was just seeping with cuteness! Although there were no tickets involved...I did feel like I was in Italy because you did a great job to create the scene with your flawless use of imagery. Nicely done!