Really good
Deep, emotional
Well written
From the heart
And true
Great job 5/5

I loved the idea i thought you could do alot more ... i was unsure if you were trying to rhyme or not othrr then tht your going in the rihht direction well done

Short but meaningful. Not bad at all. Great rite

You seem to rhyme yet not rhyme, but the (dare I say) lyrical flow makes it feel as if it is being rhymed. Different, but I liked it.