Here Comes The Tears

by CathyButterflyJC   May 28, 2012


Here comes the tears
Here comes the past
Things happen much too fast
Nightmares twisting true become your fears
As the awakening of dreams nears
These things bring heartbreaks
That always last
Scars fasten
As
Reminders lessen
And I go through the pain
Of what used to be my prays
For thanks of the gain
That ended in rain
Love is such a painful thing
So much disappoint to bring
You're such a gift
The one to lift
All my ability
From doubt
To reality
The one to push me on
The one I never thought would be gone

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  • 11 years ago

    by L

    This is really good, you are really good with rhymes and pouring down emotion.

    I also like the format, it is really interesting. Way to go.

  • 11 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Nightmares twisting true become your fears
    As the awakening of dreams nears
    These things bring heartbreaks
    That always last

    so nicely written.....i loved this poem..
    somethings sad thing from past always haunts your mind..u have clearly described it..
    Keep it up^_^

  • 11 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    Beautifully written. Loved how your rhyming kept switching styles, wouldnt think such a uniqur style would work but it sure did!!
    Good use of metaphor and great flow.
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Max

    Hmm this is fantastic poem
    I wondered at first is it sad or love but as I completed reading I noticed that it was sad maybe about somebody u loved has died and u wrote that for him or it is somebody who left u and u thought that he would love u forever
    So it is mixed feeling of sadness and love
    Your tone was much more sad than it is for love so I suggest u change this to sad poems
    Over all great read
    5/5 keep writing =)

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