Very good poem. I like how you organized this-the rhyming. I don't know if you followed an actual structure or just did how it came to you (I don't know the different poem structures because I am a amateur).

My favorite part of this poem (besides all of it) is the third stanza.Your right. Just because we are still breathing doesn't mean we aren't dead. I am glad that someone else realizes this. Thank you for posting this on here

5/5

"And just because there's not a knife through my throat
Or a bullet in my head
And though I'm still breathing
Doesn't mean I'm not dead"

--favorite part. good poem 5/5