It may not be the best poem that you ever done, but it certainly is a good one (I haven't read very many yet) :) However, I wouldn't have put this in the miscellaneous section - this seems more like a lost love poem. It probably would have fared better there than here...

This seems to me like a healing poem after a failed relationship. At the same time, it seems like you are trying to slap him in the face a little to try and wake him up - try to make him stop doing the things that caused you guys to break up in the first place.

I can see the emotion in this poem. You were hurt and you are trying to get over it. It also seems like you are annoyed with him as well. Those are the main emotions that I get out of here...

Overall, a very excellent poem
5/5

Excellent poem i like it