Comments : A Heavy Heart

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Awww nice imagery and emotions in here in the poem sweety it's a 5/5 from me very nice and short and good to read! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by karyssa smith

    I love how you related it to rain pouring down 5/5 :)

  • 11 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    I absolutely love this. ever word of it . i know how it feels to feel like bad things just keep happening and wont stop. its very overwhelming. I like the message in this . you wrote it very well.
    short but powerful.

  • 11 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    I absolutely love this. ever word of it . i know how it feels to feel like bad things just keep happening and wont stop. its very overwhelming. I like the message in this . you wrote it very well.
    short but powerful.

  • 11 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    I absolutely love this. ever word of it . i know how it feels to feel like bad things just keep happening and wont stop. its very overwhelming. I like the message in this . you wrote it very well.
    short but powerful.