Umm... WOW!

Like purely amazing! This is def. going into my favorite poem list. This is full of pain from deep with in the heart. Finally Not being able to handle it anymore and turning the tables around.

The title got my interest and once I started reading I couldn't stop. It took me back to the days with my ex and relates to my current relationship too.

I love this poem, so many ppl who went through this will relate. Penned perfectly, not one thing I'd change

5/5

I love the strength in this piece meme, "lock down state" is just a perfect way to describe what happens when we feel like this......if this is a true story then your strength will steele you self.....and he's a fool..

- i've read this book and worn this t-shirt i know exactly where your coming from, another great poet once told me " spill it and post it" it feels like thats what you've done :-) big loves meme for a great write x

OMFG!

How can I describe this poem, the strength, the IN YOUR FACE part.

Of course the sadness was evident, the heartache, the fact that you were hurt and you are only trying to protect yourself this time around. It's like fool me once shame on you type of thing.

Brilliant, awesome.

The last two lines were the best, putting it back onto this guy. Would he want to be hurt the way you did? I don't think so!

Awesome write hun, loved it!

x

Wow I love this!!! This poem is amazing, I like how you're straightforward with your feelings in this poem, and I love the strength you conveyed!! Amazing :)

And perfect title!! I love the meaning of this poem!!

Great job sweetie :)