Comments : Your Second Life

  • 11 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Very nice opening line.... i thought that line was a strong one, and its true, when someone messes up like that... i can read the sadness in this poem and also disappointment...

    i know its hard to lose someone , in any way......a part of them or completely... this is a sad poem but shows a little strength build on that....

    excellent poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Decayed

    I've already come to terms
    with losing you,
    and life still has it's photographs.
    The only difference, is that I won't be
    acting as if friendship means
    posing in your fables.

    ^ woah! what a stanzaaaa.... I love how instead of not saying this idea simple, you elaborated on it! amazing