Comments : Bitter Winds.

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Ahhh, so great! i love each line. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I sleep not, since
    sadness becomes
    my only companion.

    The loss of you,
    too much to bear
    like a fresh wound
    in my heart.

    ^These ending stanzas says it all. Sadness does become our friend when the ones who are dear to us are lost and it creates a wound that takes a very long time to heal.

    The starting stanzas shows how everything around you becomes dull and lifeless, even the very beauty of nature does not console the heart..touching..take care.

  • 11 years ago

    by KRYSTAL B

    I LIKE IT :)