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by Dagmar Wilson
Love is something so beautiful and
amazing, more than words can describe
often actions speak louder than words
Good lyrics except for the third stanza.
It sounds a little bit weird.
by Wicked Ways
Awh that was just so romantic. . . . the love was spilled out of this and turned into lovely flowers... this was a very lovely poem. . . and i think it would make a good song for these lyrics.... nice work on this it was so beautiful...its nice to read something so positive :D
nice work 5/5
by Hannah Lizette
Beautiful lyrics, great job. :) 5/5
Can I critique? Actually, I can't critique it. I found this poem so sweet and romantic, The repetition didn't bother me at all, and I simply love this piece.
Love, love, love. There's nothing as sweet and sore at the same time as love! She is lucky! ;)
by Mom Pike
I love your work. Your words flow perfectly, and you are a wonderful poet! You should write a book of poetry and I would be your first buyer!
by Purple Rose
Beautiful poem Cardwell. The flow was wonderful. It reminded me of poetry from a long time ago because of the flow, and the wording that you used .
This whole thing is just beautiful
by Maple Tree
Cardwell... this poem is very elegant and just flows like a powerful love song... I love the rhythmic tone.. it really is captivating..
by Alyssa Rianne
I love this it flows so well!