Welll this was a very interesting piece, its kind of hard o depict the meaning of it...but i thought the word flow of it was nicely written.....

even i didnt get most of it i did enjoy the serenity in the end.... so nice work

Just.... wow!
I can feel the tension under the lines you wrote.

Good poem man!
5/5

I have missed your writes, bro.
This was like no other!

This is cool. Do I sense stream-of-consciousness writing?

Very cool. great write

My mind was tossed into another dimension by this wonderful metaphoric delight! The author left me in awe of his imaginative design of word display.

"Never repugnant, unlike the local mischievous Knave who snickers at a mirror. Snickering whilst his heart
remains stifled in a clotted cavity of anatomy. " <- so darn creative, these few lines were just wow!!

Loved the different feelings and messages that I received throughout. I was left feeling sad, and yet uplifted at times all throughout this poem. Well done Timothy

Wow, you are such a lovely storyteller! I loved how you tied the title into the beginning and ending of the poem because you brought everything full circle with your words. It was short but I feel as if it told a greater story compared to its length. It felt like this piece is a continuation or related to other short poems that can all be tied in together to tell an epic story. It was wonderful! It isn't easy to tell a story through a poem without making it sounds too narrative and less poetic but you did a great job of overcoming that! Nicely done!