Comments : A Verse of Crime (Huitain)

  • 5 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Bravo, excellent!

  • 5 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Awesome Meena, the Queen of forms!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Thomas

    Very nice, I like it!

    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Great poem! Excellent flow and like the title.
    5/5!

  • 5 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    I agree, this is a excellent poem. Awesome job. I like how you wrote a poem about writing poetry :) Kind of funny in a way.

    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Karla

    Awesome Meena - one of my favourite poets here.

  • 5 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Somehow I missed this one Meena, very well done. When I read this, I get the feeling that someone is watching you write, perhaps grumbling from lack of attention making it difficult for you to write, the need to write so strong that you murder the person. lol Although Meena, I don't think you would or could murder someone but maybe could write about it.

  • 5 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Second time reading, it should be nominated for competition.

  • 5 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Meena a well deserved win this week. Well done.

  • 5 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Firstly, congratulations on winning :)

    You are an awesome writer of forms & you simply proved it again.
    Theme of this one seems to be very different from what you usually write & thats what attracted to me more.

    Congrats again & keep writing :)

    all the best and take care

  • 5 years ago

    by Matthew Anthony

    Tip top dear sir!

  • 5 years ago

    by L

    When I read this poem I got the impression that you were committing the crime of killing your pen, while his "blood" (ink) was the one imprinted on the white piece of paper. An interesting read. Now I bet your finger prints rest in the body of that pen, the proof that a verse of crime was committed by putting to much frustration onto that pen. Well done. Though, I feel the pen still lives.

  • 5 years ago

    by nourayasmine

    Those rhymes... Such a wonderful write! I could see how you find pleasure in trying new forms and perfecting them. When to others (including me) they are such a torture. I never will be able to try this much of forms, Meena, never in my life ...so hats off! :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This form is a fun one to write, but a difficult one in my opinion, to get the rhyming pattern to flow and read with a wonderful rhythm is hard to do, and the author nailed this form! The message was awesome...
    I see the author trying to write this form and needing to concentrate and it made me feel like someone was trying to distract her.
    It's as if she was crumpling paper up and tossing them at this person...
    allot of sarcasm at the end and a touch of humor is what I felt within this poem...
    Very creative and artistic!!! Awesome poem!! Well done Meena

  • 5 years ago

    by Blissful

    I love this! You truly mastered this form! Great choice of words and the drawing of emotion. What really swayed me to this poem was the title, so creative! Words are a powerful tool and you expressed that wonderfully! Nicely done!

  • 5 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    CONGRADULAIONS MEENA, NICELY DONE!!!