Comments : Beauty from Pain

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Smile from the inside at the joy that has been made
    Laugh with happiness, as all the regrets will fade

    ^This is such a nice opening for it starts with a positive note. Smiles do come from within when one is filled with happiness!

    A little baby boy makes everything all right again

    ^Babies are innocent and they put a smile on any weary sad faces..for that is the magic of a baby :)

    After years of anger, of abuse, of hatred and scorn
    After the months spent angry, the days you mourn
    Thoughts that nothing will prevail through the rain

    ^Sounds like this person has had a very tough life and a lot to deal with and your words paints a very miserable life...sad..

    Then sunshine reigns and brings beauty from pain

    ^Yes pain always does bring beauty out one way or the other.

    The endless regrets that fill your mind day after day
    Forced to make amends to see the beauty from decay
    Hours of breaking down and thinking you're insane
    A little baby boy is born and brings beauty from pain

    ^Ohhhh...I know and have felt this hopelessness until a bundle of joy came my way too..reading this brings back memories.

    Smiles fill the day, because you found beauty from pain

    ^I like the repetition of this line for it shows and brings hope for the readers. All in all a touching write filled with hope :)

    Thanks for the comment on my write too :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Babies will always change your life and like you said, make you see beauty from pain. in the long run, that baby makes all the pain you suffered worth it. beautiful write!

  • I wrote this one for my sister and her two baby boys are the best part of her life, her best accomplishment.