There is no shame in such thing
just two people feeling it at that particular
moment, who knows, it may lead to
something more and else
nice write Hannah

Nice piece perfectly penned

awesome details...that only one who has been there would know tehe..

seriously wonderful!

Well-written, Hannah. The imagery was really vivid; kinda creepy (for me) to be honest, but good nonetheless lol.

I have to say the first few lines got me!!! I loved them. The images in this poem are awesome and I think there will be many people who can relate to them. Well done.

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Wow very cool write :-) i think alot of us have been here before and you executed this piece PERFECTLY! It made me smile from ear to ear....the moment in the bathroom i can soooo relate to, such a great write well done :-)

I was like "one night stand" Should I read it?
I probably know what it will be about..
but once I read it, I was like hey! you wrote this really good, I can't relate but this created one of those images I see from movies, lol.

the awkwardness that that person was feeling was felt in the poem.

This was quite interesting, Hannah. Like Luce, I was like "Oh no, I probably shouldn't read this. It's in the explicit section," but it turned out pretty good.

"My once straight shiny hair looks like I was electrocuted,
my fake eyelashes are falling off,
and only one earring is left dangling."

^I'm really sorry if you didn't mean to do this, but I couldn't help chuckling when I read this. I could just imagine what the person looked like in this poem. Awesome use of imagery here :)

Throughout this whole poem I can sense the uncertainty in the person and the embarrassment that comes after the deed is done and all that-like you can't really take it back.

Excellent poem
5/5

Real life experience translated into a poem, real nice!

The poem was easy to imagine and really had my attention captured.

Keep on writing

5/5

Haha!

A splitting headache and the walk of shame,
what a way to start the day.

^^though it was all great I loved that ending^^

You have managed to write something with both humour and humiliation.

Fantastic job!! 5/5

Haha!

A splitting headache and the walk of shame,
what a way to start the day.

^^though it was all great I loved that ending^^

You have managed to write something with both humour and humiliation.

Fantastic job!! 5/5

Again this sums it up really well. you have a way of describing a though perfectly. i liked the walk of shame line. brought back some good memories haha. i really like this poem. i never gave your poetry a fair chance. i can see now that i was wrong and you are deserving of merit...

One nite stand cool title even better poem

p&l midnight sky