You go to the movies with justus thats what u do

I'd be myself and I love this poem. It's so me

Well composed questions that i felt really connected with the readers in that they would put themselves in your shoes. All i can suggest is question marks since they are questions.

Oh my goodness, i loved it, one of my favorites, fantasic!!!

I really really loved ur poem..it so much resembles my situation..n m pretending to be okay..just trying n trying to do adjust myself..*_*
Keep up high spirits..n keep writing..i vote u 5/5.

This would be great one, ;p