A Poem Forever

This is actually amazing (:

When I read the poem , I thought about your husband, this is a sweet poem. Let love live forever on thine lives and hearts.

It seems you are so content with your partner that the certainty of forever cannot/ will not be questioned. That is a beautiful thing in itself.

Nice poem. 5/5

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Love the title.. Very fitting for this poem. (:

Such warmth love does bring and within us it
sings like a song. A heart warming, loving and passionate write..really enjoyed this read :)

This is a very sweet poem :) I can feel the love coming off of it in waves as I read it, and that is usually hard to do for me :) However, I do have a problem with one stanza. It may just be me, but the second stanza does not quite make sense to me when I read it. I don't know if it is because of the way I am reading it...it might be. The rest is perfect though.

"I coiled my soul in the depths of madness,
walked upon sharpened blades of glass."

^ When I read this, it sounds like you are talking about before you met the person whom the poem is about. It almost seems like you were in pain - alone, frightened and you probably didn't want to be that way :)

You then meet the person and your whole world changes :) It is a really beautiful poem. I hope that you have read this to him already, or maybe read it to him someday because he deserves to know how you feel :D

Excellent
5/5