A good Poem Tori!
The story line held my interest all the way through!
A very enjoyable read! (and of course it's true!)

Nice job. I loved every second of it. You did a very nice job tori. :)
Keep it up.

The truth remains clear, as water. There's nothing truer than God's word. Outside the Truth, life is struggle. Difference is clear, when Truth is known. Nothing serves right, outside God's rules. The judgement begins, even now. From our actions, we know our stance. Him who prepares well, cannot fail. It's a choice, to live right for God.

Very thought provoking, judgement looms at the end of a life in the thoughts of every mind I suppose. How does a healthy beautiful heart, soul and mind weigh their existence against a decaying body. It makes us search through all the realms for possibilities. Perhaps the thoughts of judgement lives for a reason of balance to keep a life in check as it approaches its end. Good write.

Wow, Tori, this is really great. It seems like it answers alot of questions about how God would react when he sees ones flaws and then, you wonder if he will forgive you for your past.

I really love the ending, it is like you are admitting that you are not perfect, and though you arent, you still know that it is God's choice about where you end up. This is amazing and easily sends chills down the spine.