Are any of your poems NOT amazing? totally dig the story here. It's so rare to find a poet who's every poem you thoroughly enjoy reading. It's so strange how refreshing that is. I cant believe you were about to leave this site, where you go... I will likely follow. I've yet to find a better poem site them Poems and quotes.com. You heard of any?

a definite 5++

Awesome job. You seem to be a natural. Hats off to you!

His Heart like 'ole Teddy', now battered and old
Despite all that wear, still shines like Gold
Needs someone to love, a girl just like 'she'
To share all his warmth, and with him, just be

- This verse made me cry, beautifully put. 5/5

mandy

This is absolutely brilliant!! Your so talented. I really enjoy reading your poems! They're all really good.

Peter,
A wonderful poem here, full of great rhyming and the sentiment left me feeling rather sad for "ole Teddy"! Those last two lines almost brought a grown man to tears!.....Damn you, good fellow!
All the best and I hope you are well and have had a wonderful Christmas,
Ben

Hello Peter,

Great metaphor. We are all lovable, cuddly Teddies aren't we. It is such a shame when the love of an 'life' owner is so hard to find.

I remember writing a poem about an old, unwanted Teddy in a shop window. He was so sad that all the other battery operated toys had been sold, leaving him 'unsold' I won't spoil the ending, though predictable it is.

Anyway, we all deserve happy endings.

This is a good write and like your other work shows off your amazing talent.

Take care,

Michael