Comments : Fighting for Love

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    I like the use of "time" and "sand" because the first thing I think about is an hour glass. Until the sand seeps out, then you believe you have love but then it lies empty.
    This is an easy poem to relate to for most.

    I like the way you call yourself a fighter but also show a more gentle side to you.

    Enjoyed this.